HUMANITIES 2015 - 2016: |
What we have here on the left, is my first "timed writing". What a timed writing is, is that you are giving a certain amount of time to finish a five or more paragraph essay. The part I did well on this essay was my structure of my essay . Ex intro (hook, thesis, three reasons) three or four body paragraphs ( each paragraph about a reason and evidences to support your reasons ) and then your conclusion paragraph (restate all what your wrote and your final thought you want to leave your reader on. What I know I did bad and could improve was the hook or to even start the essay because it probably took me longer to just start it, then to finish it. Other then that I believe I did pretty well on it.
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Above me is a part of an essay that i've been working on for the last past week. I chose the topic homeless encampments because i would see this every day and no body would want to be in their shoes, not even themselves.